Let’s talk rocks…

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Long summer days under the pines in North Carolina could be very boring without some creativity. Store bought toys had to stay in the house, but I didn’t want to stay inside. My solution was playing with rocks. I built rock cities, simple at first, but increasingly complex and large. I invented elaborate stories for these cities and eventually competing agendas led to conflict.

The cities fielded rock armies, tanks and aircraft, I even developed imaginary technology for the cities to wage war on one another. A handy lead pipe sparking on the rocks as countless battles raged across my front yard gave me a satisfying release I wouldn’t have dared with store bought toys. I even drew a map and worked out a history for the Valley of Nod that I named my imaginary country.

Building and breaking rock cities didn’t seem odd at the time. What I remember most are the stories and building conflict that kept me occupied for days at a time. The first characters I imagined inhabited the Valley of Nod, and the first stories I constructed played out there too. I only wish I’d written them down, instead of narrating them in my head.

When I write now, I have all the years I spent in the Valley of Nod bringing an imaginary world to life to guide me in my world building. The characters and conflict I write about now is more refined, the settings are far different, but a part of every story I tell hearkens back to those summer days under North Carolina pine trees. I’ll rock on, as long as I’m able.

I don’t have an art department…

So I hire artists on Fiverr when I need something done. I’ve tried to draw in the past, but discovered I’m not even good a sketching. So this piece is the latest project I’ve had done. It’s part of a scene in the opening chapter of Fantastic America. No spoilers, but this is a much better depiction of what the main character, Ashley Monahan reports on than I could produce. It isn’t a perfect representation of the image from my mind, but it’s pretty darn close!

If you like what you see, and I hope you do, there is more on the way. I’d like to get at least five more of these to show off here at The Sorcerers’ Realm. They all relate to one aspect or another of the Magic Unleashed series. Some you’ll see more of than others, in the run up to each book in the series. This one you’ll read about first, and it connects to The Sorcerers’ Realm directly, so it was only fitting to have it made first. Enjoy!

I have a deep well…

Creatively that is. I see connections in all kinds of unrelated things. Not all of those connections make sense to other people, but once in a while I stumble onto something that really works. The best of these ideas form some part of the stories I tell. In a perfect world they resonate with my audience and enhance the story I try to tell.

One of my favorite thought exercises is to collaborate with other writers to create ideas and themes for their work. Not only am I helping someone else, but the ideas spark more connections for my work as well. A real win – win for all of us. I don’t get to collaborate like that as much as I’d like to, so I jump on the few I am able to join in on.

How do ancient legends impact the modern world?

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For most of us, the impact may be negligible, but in the world of Fantastic America and Midwestern Magicians, many of those ancient legends have come to life. How those legends came to be has become less important since the winter solstice reintroduced magic to the world. Far more important now, are what those legends can tell the modern world about protecting themselves from the weird creatures our ancestors encountered long ago. Giant sea serpents and fiery Hell hounds show up on the evening news. Dealing with these emerging threats is not only part of the news story. Congress debates what to do while similar discussions break out in coffee shops around the country. As the weird grows more potent, modern weapons seem less effective. Sooner or later, bullets and missiles in arsenals around the world may not be enough.

There’s not enough wonder in the world…

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At least, there isn’t enough appreciation for the wonder in our world, in my opinion. There is such a variety of wonderful and fantastic things in the real world, that I almost forget about the terrible and mundane things. Almost, but not quite. A child’s laughter, the sun sparkling off ocean waves, snow falling from a sky backlit by a small town’s streetlights, all of these things, and a million more besides can make me smile involuntarily. That doesn’t negate the awful signs of hate, discontent, and malice in the world. It just holds a candle up to push back the dark until the sunrise.

The fantastic elements of stories are an exaggeration of those wonderful and awful things. They provide a way for us to see in bolder terms or with bigger stakes, the same ideas in the real world. Life doesn’t need those elements from our imagination. Sometimes it’s hard enough to deal with punching in to work, paying the light bill on time, and keeping food on the table. Humans yearn for more than survival though, we want the dragons, soaring castles, and enchanted forests to challenge us safely from the confines of a story. There is joy and wonder in triumphing over adversity, real or imagined.

So next time you feel a wave of self-doubt, lingering sadness, or cloying fear about this world we live in, hold on to the wonder you’ve felt before. My advice may not be a panacea for every situation. But I believe hope springs eternal, nourished by such small sources of joy as these. Our collective experience of living, is made up of the sum of all the highs and lows we feel. Choose joy when you can, find strength in yourself, and give others what grace you can manage. That’s all any of us can do, with all the wonders and horrors in the world aside.

Writers are their harshest critic… (And that’s Okay!)

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Long before a book is ready for the world, writers (hopefully) spend many hours to shape it into the best possible story it can be. Writing, rewriting, editing, and polishing this jewel of thought and care into a newborn book for audiences to enjoy forever. At least, that’s been my experience so far. I’ve talked about beta readers and editors before and how important it is to have their feedback in my process. What I haven’t talked much about is how I process that feedback and inject it back into my work.

Some things are obvious once someone else pints it out, and I have berated myself for not seeing that flaw myself. Other feedback outright enrages me, because the reviewer didn’t understand what I was trying to accomplish (usually my fault as well) or want to impose their idea over what I have on the page. The best feedback shows me something I hadn’t considered, and wouldn’t have thought of without a question or comment in the margin. Ultimately, the audience only has what is on the page to guide them and explain the story to them, just about anything they don’t understand or are unclear about falls back to me to have included on the page.

That is why I put so much effort into making each page, each paragraph and each sentence read exactly as I intend. I seldom feel successful, but when I do, it is glorious indeed. The highest praise I can expect is for a reader to comment about how a scene or character created the emotional response I intended. So be hard on your work as you write, but also give yourself some grace to improve your craft, to hit all the important points, and build up your work as you go.

What if…?

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Possibilities and questions about what could happen inspire most of my work. Fantastic America and Midwestern Magicians examine what would happen if magic returned to our modern world. Other stories I’ve written (however poorly) examine other questions. Like, what does it mean to be human? What do we share in common as a species (like food, sleep, and death) and what differences (cultural, religious, and technical) are there besides that? Sometimes especially in a novel length work, several questions come up through the narrative. What is the right thing to do in a given situation, and how do you choose when there is more than one ‘right’ choice? How does the toss of a coin, or roll of the dice change what could happen into what does happen? Choices my characters make and the repercussions from those choices are one of my favorite topics to explore. Not making a choice at all is great to explore, though it can be tough to show how restraint is the best choice of all sometimes.

While in the Navy, I was once put in charge of firing a missile at a drone off the coast of Crete. We spent weeks preparing, days arming the missile before the firing event, and the whole ship was expecting to see a launch and explosion. On the day of the exercise I was ready to shoot. Tension was high, other Naval vessels were taking part in the exercise as well. My ship lined up to fire and everyone on board expected me to shoot down this drone. (Drones were new and untested in the Navy back then.)

I had the drone lit up on my radar, but it kept drifting out of the safe firing zone. When I finally locked on again, it had drifted too close to a trailing ship. My finger was on the launch button, but firing would endanger the ship behind us. The firing range reported seconds later that they had lost control of the drone. They recovered what was left of it on the shoreline later. If I’d shot that day, I would have put over three hundred fellow sailors in harms way. I chose restraint, but that is hardly as sexy or exciting as Luke’s run on the Death Star.

Readers (and authors) want satisfying endings…

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I don’t mean that every loose end must be tied up, or every mystery solved, but the main points have to have some resolution, even if it’s temporary. More important from a writer’s perspective, whatever premise, plot device, character flaw, or question asked in the inciting incident (Act I of the three part structure) needs a definite resolution in or near the climax (Act III’s pivotal moment). The best stories see the main character triumph not just over the antagonist, but over whatever held them back from heroism to begin with. Luke lets the force guide him, Frodo gives up the ring (and a finger), After defeating Shaddam IV, Paul Muad’Dib sees the bloody Jihad unleashed in his name.

Okay that last one sets up the rest of the Dune series, but the resolution still ties up the majority of the plot set up in the first Act. Each of those examples feels fulfilling because the problems encountered along the way, Frodo’s Journey, Luke’s battle with the Empire, and Paul’s confrontation of ‘The Outer World’ satisfies the readers desire to finish what Act I sets in motion. Catharsis in each of these stories comes from the resolution of the immediate conflict, the main character and their companions survival is an added bonus that makes their victories even more satisfying. Look for that same idea in one form or another in Fantastic America, not that all the loose ends will be tied up, but that Ashley Monahan will resolve the issues she struggles with through the climax.

The distant past still impacts the present day…

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Magic has flowed into our world before, and whole cultures lost in the distant past relied on magic to function. I’ll leave descriptions and notes about those cultures for future posts. Those cultures perished without a trace when magic failed and the bleak times began. People from these cultures were either scattered to the winds or died trying to find a way to survive a world without magic. For us, the bleak times were normal. Civilizations have risen and fallen for over six millennia without magic to sustain them. The people who lived through the end of the last magical age adapted to an Earth much different to the one they new. Just like modern inhabitants of the Magic Unleashed series have to adapt to the changing environment in Fantastic America and Midwestern Magicians.

Just the same, those cultures left a legacy that survived their demise. All over the world, people will rediscover traces of these civilizations lost to the bleak times. In addition to ruins never explored by archaeologists, some of those traces take the form of relics from that forgotten age. Scattered around the globe just like the people from those long gone cultures, these relics still hold power and pose dangers to those who find them now that magic has returned to the modern world.

Ghosts are real in Fantastic America…

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But they are not the only spirits loose in the world. Ghosts have lingered in the world of the living after death for thousands of years, but since the winter solstice of 2012, they are now few and far between. Those left behind share one common trait, a strong attachment (sometimes involuntary) to the world of the living. Other spirits that go bump in the night were constrained by these free roaming apparitions are now free themselves. Wraiths dark parodies of human ghosts left over from the last magical age now scourge the living. They seek to corrupt and consume the essence of the living. Other even more alien spirits linger in places far from the living and the dead. The purposes of these lonely spirits seldom ever coincide with either the living or the dead. They have granted boons and curses through hastily agreed to bargains. These spirits and more now populate the changing Earth in Fantastic America and Midwestern Magicians, the first two books in the Magic Unleashed series.

Hello, World!

(Or whatever the C programming manual said…)

Welcome to the inaugural post of (I had to steal the teeniest bit of Presidential thunder: drumroll please…) The Sorcerers’ Realm! I’m still trying to get all the bugs worked out of moving from Renegade-Galaxy.com here, but I’m making progress (even if its painfully slow). I think all my blog posts are intact, my handful of followers seems unaffected, and I’m able to find the site when I go look for it. There are still some problems, but I expected that before I decided to make the switch. If you have problems or suggestion, by all means let me know… In the meantime – I have more content related to my contemporary fantasy debut novel, Fantastic America coming this month and I hope to finally have Jerry Farmer’s gruesome origin story ready to share as a free eBook soon. Until then, stay fantastic!