3 Characters One Book

 Ashley Monahan is the protagonist of Fantastic America, flanked by Daniel Forrester in the role of antagonist, and Jerry Farmer as the principal villain. All three of their stories eventually weave together. Each one has trials, tribulations, and a few victories between the opening scene of the novel and The End.

 Ashley is looking to make an impact on her hometown. The solstice events open her eyes to a whole new world. Daniel is looking forward to a quiet weekend before Christmas. The horrors he witnesses on the solstice harden his resolve to protect and defend. Jerry just wants his meds. He had no idea the solstice would bring him a new ally and the power to escape his confinement.

 All three of them make an impact on a world changed by the return of magic. They aren’t the only players on the field, but they are the most important to show the depth of the changes unfolding between the world we recognize and the weird world they inhabit. Their agendas couldn’t be more different, but magic will entangle them just the same.

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If you like following my writing journey and the hints I’ve left for the books in the Magic Unleashed series, tell your friends. Spread the word and invite them to visit too. I have a pitch event this week (updates to follow), and I start querying agents next week. My journey is going to be a rollercoaster in the weeks ahead!

Mythology makes great backstories!

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I don’t mean that mythology is my story, but that the myths and legends are part of the story. Interpreting myth in light of events in the narrative give me room to reimagine those ancient tales. Simply reinterpret a god or goddess as a powerful magic user. Creatures from other worlds could be mythical animals not present in our mundane world. Battles between divine forces become misunderstood fights between potent wizards. The possibilities are limitless.

Using those ideas, I’ve borrowed stories from around the world and created cultures that depended on magic to survive. When magic failed, those cultures died out too. Survivors had to find new ways to live, join existing non-magical groups, or unable to adjust to the bleak times, perish. Heroes, gods, and monsters from ancient times become figures for modern day concern. The legends of our ancestors have become a road map for the last magical age, and a blueprint for the return of magic.

Fantastic America is a gentle introduction to how those legendary stories can come alive in the modern world. Efreeti and Djinn can coexist with Apache helicopters and Abrams tanks. The internet and scrying for information can compete for accuracy. Worlds we thought were pure imagination, filled with peoples and histories we have no knowledge of, collide with the certainty of science and technology. What could possibly go wrong?

Stay humble…

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No matter how far you get in writing or in life, there is always more to learn. You can be better tomorrow than you were yesterday. I’m reminded of this fact every time my work comes back from my critique group. I am a better writer now than I was before, but I can still improve, and my critique partners are glad to share the many ways I can do better. Their attention has helped me over and over again.

Writers need thick skin. Agents and editors will reject your work. Readers will give you bad reviews. Beta readers and critique partners will point out flaws in your writing. A writer with thin skin will be hurt by all this, or will take the criticism personally. I have been there and felt the pain to know this.

Criticism, even harsh words on a page should not deter you from your writing journey. Even in the worst feedback I’ve gotten about my work, there was something to learn. I may not agree with every word someone writes about my work, but I am certain there is some detail, or observation that will help me write a better version of the story. Sometimes I have to really search for it, but I’ve yet to search and find nothing of value.

I’m not a master of my craft yet. This is a journey. When I started writing to be published, I had no idea how little I knew about writing. Years later, I finally know there is a lot I don’t know. I also know that I can learn what I don’t have mastered. I can write well, and rewrite better, and all of that came from reading and writing with feedback from other writers who were also on their writing journey.

Love is in the air…

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Actually, as I write this, cold is in the air (-2 degrees F or about -19 C). Still, Valentine’s Day is almost upon us in the US, and I do love to love… or something. My novel is far from a romance story, but there are prominent couples in love. The main character, Ashley Monahan, and her antagonist, Daniel Forrester, are both happily married. Part of the joy I found in writing Fantastic America came from comparing and contrasting how different yet similar the two characters are.

In candid moments, Ashley and Daniel show love and affection for their spouse. Tragedy strikes them both, and both respond to the events differently. Either character could have chosen a different path. Ultimately, who they are after their loss was a product of who they were before. Their love is just as deep, their reactions just as powerful, and the consequences affect the story directly.

Marriages (or other kinds of loving relationships) are not the focus of my book, but love (or lack thereof) is a part of the human condition. So there are certainly representations of love, and loss, joy, and regret throughout the novel. My hope, is that I make them real enough that my audience never questions why a character reacts the way they do to the events on the page.

I’d like you to meet Gavin Dalton…

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When we meet Mr. Dalton, he is the regional director and day to day operations manager for the Ess group of companies. On the night of the winter solstice, Gavin is summoned to the Park Avenue West penthouse of his employer, Haruko Sato. In private, Sato-san runs the upper echelons of his financial empire as the self-styled Dragon Lord. Gavin is his chief Daimyo, performing both legitimate and questionable activities to further his Lord’s interests. Sato-san has a specific mission for Gavin that no other agent in his employ can complete.

The mission opens Gavin’s eyes metaphorically and literally to hidden elements of Sato-san’s plans. A danger Gavin could not imagine confronts him on late-night his mission. His loyalty to the Dragon Lord hangs on a knife edge. Despite his years of service and training to follow Sato-san’s orders, Gavin questions both his instructions and his Lord’s motives.

I’d like to introduce you to Sydney Clay…

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Sydney is the producer behind Ashley Monahan’s weekend news show. She becomes a good friend and confidant while Ashley is living alone in New York City. Fiercely loyal, witty and energetic, Syd is one of the few highpoints for Ashley in the Big Apple. Together, the pair take on the daunting task of keeping Ashley’s ratings high, while still promoting calm despite constant reasons to panic.

Sydney is young enough to remain idealistic, but has been in broadcasting long enough to know how cutthroat it can be. She brings experience and optimism to Ashley’s team, to balance Ashley’s enthusiasm and naivete. She and Ashley mesh well together and build a team that others at the network might consider misfits. They consider each other an extended work family.

Internal Conflict

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The main character in my debut novel, Fantastic America isn’t a fierce warrior. She does get into dangerous situations, but she’s not (at least not yet) a fighter. What she does do is struggle internally. She fights against running from danger, avoids conflict with her family, and balances her faith against the weird events she reports on around the country.

On the surface, that may not be as thrilling as Circe outmaneuvering Daenerys, first of her Name. I’d argue there is a place at the table for fighting and overcoming what holds a character back. The stakes can still be high. Will Ashley turn away from what she sees happening, or embrace the changes to help save life as we know it? The internal struggle in other words, can and should impact the larger setting. The impact of the emotional journey should reflect how the character addresses events and characters as those internal changes progress.

Some of the most satisfying exchanges between characters happen because an internal struggle is going on or was resolved. Luke tossed his lightsaber away, refusing to bow to the Emperor. There were consequences for that choice, and the same should be true for characters in a similar situation. Ashley faces a series of tough choices, she’s not always ready to face those decisions, and that too is part of her journey. Just like in real life.

Anticipation… when I’m so close to the finish line!

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Inches away from my goal!

Fantastic America is almost readable! There are a handful of spots I have marked for polishing, but 98% of the manuscript is ready. While the manuscript is ready, I won’t say finished, because I expect more revisions throughout the agent, submissions, publishing process. I’ll say it’s coherent and the story is no longer a rough set of ideas strung together. Ashley’s journey is center stage, not overshadowed by Daniel and complimented by Jerry’s appearances.

I can see the promised land from here. I may not get there tomorrow. I may not get there this week. I will get there soon, and the surety of that notion fills me with hope and excitement. My goal is to share my stories with the widest possible audience. This is a major step on that journey. I have many steps left to take.

I’ve charted the publishing path for the most part. Publishing will bring more challenges as I continue my journey. I expect many more sleepless nights as I wrestle with those challenges. In fact, I welcome the unknown and relish facing what obstacles I have yet to meet. The rewards pour in as I walk the path, the finish line, always receding in the distance will be that much sweeter.

There are many different kinds of evil…

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People vilify the unknown.

The world of Fantastic America shares all the same evils as our world, but also has magic to contend with. Not that magic is inherently evil at all, but it adds complexity to the human condition. Besides magic as a force to be reckoned with, there are creatures and people from other worlds who would gladly find their way to Earth. Evil, as a human construct, is generally in the eye of the beholder.

Some of the many forms evil takes in the real world are easy to find in Fantastic America. Corruption, murder, and mayhem are mundane varieties of evil we are accustomed to in the real world. Magic adds new tools for would be evil doers, but that’s not all. Inhuman entities, some filled with malice and hate exist in worlds beyond, and they too have designs on an unsuspecting Earth.

These forces cannot be reasoned with, frightened away, or bribed. The must be fought, scoured from existence, wiped away and destroyed. Otherwise, they will overwhelm humanity or accept our surrender, before consuming us all.

When magic returned, the forces of good and evil turned their gaze from beyond the physical universe to find an Earth unprepared to defend itself. We have no champions, and little time to prepare. Without defenders, Humanity is at risk for all manner pain and suffering.

Update on my debut novel…

The first book in the Magic Unleashed series.

With January officially behind us, I’m happy to announce my latest round of post developmental edits are done. I still have a few spots left to polish up, but I’ll be ready to move on in the process. I’m punching up the action, conflict and drama as I fill in the last few pages I planned to add. Beta reader feedback has come in, and I’m going through that as well! There’s no where to go but up from here. Thank you for following along with me on the journey. 🙂

I still have more to write, even after Fantastic America is polished and done. I have three more novels outlined in the same world, and dozens of ideas for short stories for secondary characters. The worlds these stories connect to will be prominent in the second half of the series – seven books in all. I’m excited to share those adventures with you too!

Sometimes the work changes as you write it…

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When I began writing Fantastic America the first time, it wasn’t the novel I have now. My vision didn’t include a national news celebrity, a dogged federal agent, or a maniac magical serial killer. All of those characters grew out of the same ‘what if’ question, how would people react? Originally I had a first book of six main characters that don’t even appear in the novel now. Those characters are waiting for their time on stage starting with Midwestern Magicians. Even those books could change as I write them.

The great thing about telling (or showing) stories is that they can build on themselves. As an author I had to reevaluate the amount of material I had written. The rough draft was too long compared to commercial fiction guidelines (once I knew that was a thing). I had to break that embryonic book into two, then four and now at least six books. As the characters grew more unique so did what they needed to say to leave their stamp on the series.

I’ve agonized over who should appear in which book. Knowing which POV to show the scenes through can be difficult. Including the right amount of each unique voice in each book is taxing beyond the words on the page. I didn’t know I needed any of that when I started my writer’s journey. I’ve had to learn (and keep learning) craft and commitment to the work. Take writing one day at a time, one page at a time.

Nothing is set in stone. I’ve had to kill my darlings to advance the plot. I’ve left out some details, and added in more emotional attributes for my audience. Some material changed the tone of a scene or chapter, even the whole book from some perspectives. So the audience has the best experience they can while getting my story on the page. Anything else is trivial and subject to a red pen stroke.

A hand at work behind the scenes…

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The world of Fantastic America is almost identical to the real world. Until the return of magic, they would have appeared the same. There are some fundamental differences of course. Magic, at least the kind I’m writing about has never surged into our world. The characters I write about have not, for the most part, played a prominent role in the history (or present) of the real world.

One of those characters is not what he seems. One has influenced the development of humanity and all of our shared cultures since before we were a species. The hand guiding all these events, shaping our beliefs, our very understanding of the physical universe, has remained in the shadows. Like puppets on a string we’ve done this being’s bidding. Whether magic flowed in our world or the bleak times drove magic users to desperate measures.

Now that magic has returned, this puppet master will seek to coerce humanity to dance for him anew. They are unprepared to confront him. He has carefully made it impossible for any of them to know he exists. They certainly don’t know that he has shaped humanity to serve his purpose for this moment. Wizards, arcanists, familiars, miracle workers, and ordinary humans alike will either play the part he has cast them in, or rebel against his eons of deceit.

The outcome of that may or may not play directly into his plans as well. Anyone who can set a plan in motion over thousands, even millions of years can plan for a few disruptive humans. Could our obstinate, unruly nature help us escape a destiny forged by this hidden elder being?

Zombies.

The first inkling anyone has in Fantastic America that they are dealing with nightmares come to life, are hordes of ravenous undead pouring into their world. Thousands of people fall to the hordes in violent gory deaths, only to rise again as mindless flesh eaters. Their world reacts the same way our world would, by deploying infectious disease teams to isolate the pathogen.

The teams are unable to find a pathogen of course (this is fantasy not science fiction). They are unable to find a culprit they can understand at all. They do find something they genuinely don’t understand, and that eventually draws Ashley Monahan to investigate. Still reveling in her triumphant report on the solstice events that brought zombies to her world to begin with, going to a zombie quarantine is not on her to do list.

What Ashley discovers will shock the entire world, and open up a new way to push back the darkness. Assuming she survives to tell the truth. Assuming the government allows her to tell the story. There are more than a few assumptions between her and another scoop of a lifetime. She may not be eminently qualified, but Ashley is her world’s best hope to fight the horrors unleashed by the return of magic.

Dialogue is my friend…

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The more I work with characters on the page, the more their unique voices come through. One of the best writing exercises I’ve tried is to interview my characters about their lives. All the questions and answers come from me, but it also frees me to answer from their perspective. Sometimes those answers are surprising!

Dialogue also allows me to explore parts of the story, or events without wading through paragraphs of telling. It’s still important to avoid, “As you know, Bob…” or other lazy writing, but a balance of description, action, and dialogue can make a good scene great. Characters feel authentic and alive when their voice comes through instead of mine. Not every character needs that level of realism, but its good to have them where it counts.

The variety of conversations characters can have is worth exploring, too. Small talk can include details that might never show up otherwise. Playful banter can hint at simmering emotions. Angry tirades can reveal hidden agendas. Even a few well placed questions during a conversation can show a character’s depth (or lack thereof). The Devil is in the details.

It took me a while to move from good dialogue to great conversations. I have an ear for how people talk, but without description and dialogue tags, my words still fell flat. A talking head in a white room doesn’t help my readers at all (Even if they could get away with it in the Matrix).

I had to learn to ground my dialogue in the scenes I wrote. Purposeful movement through a well described setting while characters talk makes a scene feel much more real. When Ashley and her husband talk over breakfast, the details of their kitchen may not be relevant to the story, but its vital to the reader to feel like they are there with them.

The most impassioned speech a character can give won’t feel tethered to the scene without weaving who is talking, where they are, and what they are doing. A guy and his father arguing might be a good scene. Compared to Luke hanging on with one hand while Vader tells him the truth, its no contest. The reader only has what is written on the page to feel connected to my story, make sure they have all they need.

Magic (like writing) is Difficult…

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During the bleak times of no magic, spellwork took inordinate efforts to achieve the simplest of results. Since there are no books (or scrolls) to lead magic users in their craft in Fantastic America, trial and error has become the only way to learn the possibilities magic offers them. Accidents, some deadly, are bound to happen.

An important aspect of using magic is the toll it takes on spell casters. Regardless of the kind involved, mental stamina and sheer willpower control how magic operates. In the new magical age, even the most experienced witches lack the stamina to cast more than the most basic spells. Magical abilities take far less stamina, but also require practice to achieve proficiency.

The energies involved in magic change its users. Each kind of magic has a base emotion that makes that magic more potent. Rage, calm, cold reason, hope, passion, and cruelty, all improve the potency and durability of related spellwork. Contrariwise, the lack of the proper emotional state can harm the spell or decrease its effectiveness. Discovering this through trial and error will pose a steep learning curve as well.

These difficulties make magic tiring. Physically, magic leaves few obvious signs to outside observers. Mentally and emotionally, spellwork takes a heavy toll. Wizards, arcanists, and familiars must rest and relax after using their powers for extended times or major spell casting. The alternative can lead to loss of control, and permanent damage to their ability to use magic at all.

In the short term, magic will be difficult and dangerous to wield, its results will vary widely. Once magic users begin to master the aspect of magic they have access to, the dangers and unpredictability will decrease dramatically. There will always be a human element in spellwork prone to mistakes, but practice and survival will remove the inept from the world, like any other endeavor.

Diversity in Fiction (Especially Fantasy)

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White male protagonists, ‘saving’ other ethnically labeled people, are deeply entrenched in modern fiction. So much that audiences take it for granted. James Cameron’s Avatar was the first one that popped into my mind, but there are plenty of others. The white savior is an old idea. He is part of the fabric of novels and films as well. Lawrence of Arabia, Tarzan, Alan Quartermain, Marvel Comics Iron Fist, John Candy in Cool Runnings, even Sandra Bullock in ‘The Blind Side’ reinforce the notion that if not for the guidance of white people, few people of color could succeed in the world.

Of course, this is nonsense, but human societies are ruled by nonsense. There are ways to push back against this conceit in fiction. Writing characters who are perfectly capable of saving themselves and others who also happen to be people of color is one place to start. Writing those same characters without cultural appropriation can be a challenge, but empowering humanity as a whole is a noble pursuit unto itself.

Diversity in my fiction made sense well beyond the absurdity of the white savior. People like to see themselves reflected in the novels they read. I’d feel disingenuous if I didn’t have a red-headed white man in some story of mine, but I haven’t encountered the spot he’d fit into yet. How many Asian, African or Indigenous Americans would like to see characters they can relate to in fiction? All of them, I suspect.

Along the same lines as diversity in characters is another role for modern fantasy: Setting. For close to a hundred years, Medieval European analogs dominated fantasy stories (especially high or epic fantasy). Tolkien directly influenced generations of fantasy writers who have followed his trailblazing, but that vision of Middle-Earth has still hobbled our imaginations. This is the white savior in absentia, his culture (or some slightly disguised version of it) is the one any world would aspire to or ultimately achieve—an equally preposterous (and boring) idea.

Although the setting for my debut novel, Fantastic America, is solidly an analog for the real world, the settings beyond it are as diverse as my limited imagination could manage. There are certainly analogs of elves and dwarves. There are also very alien Djinn, a variety of sentient animal-humanoids, and merfolk living in worlds unlike Middle-Earth entirely. I’ve borrowed liberally from historical cultures around the world to influence those settings, but none of them are inherently Persian, Hindu, or Chinese either.

For me, fantasy is about possibilities, a way to escape the mundane world. I’d prefer worlds that allow us to examine emotions, social constructs, institutions without including a sermon from me about how I see them. An imaginary failed state is much easier for readers to assess than a real one with actual people who lived and perhaps died defending its culture and history. High ideals are wonderful until an entire nation picks and chooses who gets to participate in those ideals.

Fortunately, many more perspectives and unique voices are emerging in fantasy. Increasing diversity in fiction is as apparent as strolling through the shelves of your nearest bookstore. There are financial incentives for publishers to continue this trend, and I can only hope the white savior and associated tropes fade away as more voices join the chorus.

I struggle with complexity…

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Not in creating the complex fabric of the worlds in my stories, but in how to share that scope with my audience. I don’t want to overwhelm my readers with details, the characters and settings should feel natural and nuanced. The information I introduce builds layer by layer without long tracts of exposition, or at least that is my intent. My problem is that the world of Fantastic America is more elaborate than the real world it’s based on.

More importantly, I have characters who know that deeper history. I haven’t revealed everything about these characters, or how they came by all this information. That’s part of the fun for me as an author, but can still cause that sense of overwhelm I try to avoid. Sometimes, you just have to go for it and ensure your readers have enough information to keep up.

The information these characters dribble out as the stories unfold is important to the over arching plot of the series. Each individual piece fits together to inform the whole picture. By the third act, the audience should scream at the main characters to put the same picture together. They have to put that picture together and that takes time, before they can begin to analyze what they see.

Other authors may have different opinions about how to reveal information. If another approach works for them, that’s marvelous! Giving my audience smaller pieces of the picture over time (maybe with a few larger chunks here and there to spice it up) works. It’s the perfect long term delivery method. The process works for world building, as well as plot, and character development.

Sometimes I wonder if I’m doing enough…

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I write, I blog, I learn about SEO, and I post links where I feel they’re appropriate. Still, I wonder what else I could do, what more I can learn what other way can I get my message and content out into the world? I don’t know if there is a right or wrong way to proceed on this journey, but I do know it sometimes feels fruitless to send my work out into the world only to hear crickets in return.

I have a thick writer’s skin for criticism, but I have to admit some vulnerability to no reply at all. Not everyone is going to appreciate my work, I understand that, but not even clicking a link to read it leaves me wondering where I went wrong. This isn’t my endgame of course, but it keeps me occupied while I alternate between editing and researching agents for the next leg of my journey.

I’m all ears for anyone with suggestions, or happy to commiserate with anyone in the same boat. There are solutions out there, but I have no idea where to find them. Still, “It can’t rain all the time.”

Magic isn’t all terrible…

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In the world of Fantastic America, there is plenty of darkness and fear surrounding magic. Nightmarish monsters have brought plenty of fear with them. These creatures and powers don’t define magic though, they are only aspects of how magic can manifest. Not every world touched by magic is filled with horrors brought to life. Seeing that potential is difficult for most people, and the simplest, knee-jerk reaction is to label all magic and creatures as dangerous. The American government believes everything related to the solstice is dangerous if not outright evil.

Some people, mostly those with an affinity to magic of one kind or another, see magic in a different way entirely. For them, magic is like a missing ingredient from their life. An ingredient they didn’t even know was missing until it found them for the first time. Now that they’ve tasted how sweet it can make their life, the idea of turning their back on it is unthinkable.

Ashley Monahan develops a unique appreciation for magic, magical creatures, and people touched by magic. She sees more potential in magic than she does danger. This puts her at odds with the government, her family, and many well intentioned but misguided people around the world. Her reporting puts her closer to magic and paranormal phenomena than most people, but it only bothers her when those things are truly dangerous.

Ashley’s biggest challenge isn’t learning which things to fear and which to embrace. She has to share that knowledge with skeptics and those already convinced that magic is evil. She will need allies who feel the same hope for magic that she does. Fortunately, her job takes her all around the country to find just such people. If she can convince enough of them to band together, before fear overwhelms civilization as we know it entirely.

I’ve been trying to figure out…

How to get Jerry Farmer’s story out into the world. I knew I wanted to give it away, and I knew that was possible. It took me all this time to figure out how to do that from a technical standpoint. I spent most of today trying to fix that, and I think I’ve succeeded. Access may be far from perfect. I think you’ll at least be able to download and read it now. Something I’ve struggled with for longer than I expected.

Jerry has been a literal troubled soul his whole life. No one believed he could see ghosts as a child. No one believed him as an adult, when he tried to explain that a ghost pushed him to kill their neighbor. Maybe all that honesty falling on deaf ears pushed Jerry too far. Spending years in a mental hospital for the criminally insane may have pushed him beyond redemption. Really, there’s no maybe about it, but I’ll let you decide for yourself.

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